Outline: Researched Persuasive Essay SOURCES: You will need to incorporate at least four (4) of these sources into your essay. If you use too few sources, your argument will appear uninformed and superficial. If you use too many sources, your argument will get lost in the clamor of all those other voices. The trick is to use enough sources to demonstrate that you have read and thought about the issue, which includes using sources to support your position and sources to offer counterarguments to your position. Four sources is a good goal to find that balance ASSIGNMENT: Create a detailed outline that shows your ideas for your essay. TRY: Quote length can be longer than 7 words in the outline. Take as long as you want for this part of the process.OPENING YOUR ESSAYI. THE BEGINNING. ATTENTION / TOPIC DISCUSSION Have you ever tried to call your friend from a long distance location? Or did you send a personal email to your loved one? Now imagine a government agency reading your private emails and listening to every word spoken into your phone. Would you be concerned about your privacy rights?B. THESIS EXERCISE (with a reservation)With recent technologies, such as "Google Glass" and high-tech tracking devices, more and more people are concerned about "freedom of interference" problems. Seemingly innocuous text files can often track personal information, and cell phones can record text messages and phone calls. While the technology has been beneficial to society, it poses serious problems for user privacy.THE BODY OF YOUR ESSAYII. FIRST MAIN POINT. YOUR LOCATION / COMPLAINTS Cell phones have become an asset in people's daily lives. Gone are the days when cell phones were described as luxury items...... middle of paper......_______________________________________ENDING YOUR PAPERVIII. CLOSURE. THESIS REVIEW (with different wording) Technological advances have had a positive impact on society by increasing security, promoting global communication and offering easy access to knowledge. However, these devices have many negative impacts, including manipulation of privacy.B. FINAL THOUGHTS (What should the reader consider or remember? How should they act on this issue? Individuals need to realize that freedom is something you have to take for yourself. While there may never be a perfect balance between privacy and technology, there there are many ways to inform people about the possible dangers of these high-tech gadgets. If we can all work together to promote our rights, laws that support privacy concerns could be implemented. After all, the people are the government.
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