Since the topic of Pop Art is a broad topic, I focus primarily on how American consumer culture influenced and shaped the movement. The paragraph explaining Pop Art's continuing influence in areas such as fashion, art, and even music videos helped make the essay relevant to readers. Overall, the essay contained a number of grammatical errors (particularly the use of commas) and a more in-depth explanation of what caused American consumerism. A more complete summary of article revisions follows. Instructor